[Writing - Novel] Le'lis

This was a study on environment description for myself, and also a study of a culture on my world that was destroyed 28 years ago.This is in the third person omniscient point of view.

If you have a few extra minutes I would appreciate you taking a peek.

This does have some violent imagery.
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They had not been a people of walls. The city had been unprotected that day, a day of celebration and enjoyment. A wedding was planned for the next and the city guard was lax.
 

Twenty eight years had passed. It has retained the beauty it had once had, this city that had been named aptly, Beaulieu, Beautiful place in their tongue.
 

 

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